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Old 06-21-2008, 01:53 PM   #11 (permalink)
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this was a poem I wrote for my school's Lit Mag, which incidentally was edited by GF's Kazmarov.

God invented corners for a reason
Two sides to enclose you
Two sides to expose you
Like the friend who really knows you
Two sides to keep you safe

From the inside, a corner represents enclosure
A reason to stand still, curl up, and stay
But from the outside…
it marks change
An angle is a new leaf, turning at the point

God invented corners for a reason
You can use them however you like
You look at the world, all you really see is angles
Angles and curves
Each an opportunity to hide from the world
Or whip around it on a dime

Two sides to enclose you
Two sides to expose you

So it really comes down to which two you turn to
Two sides meet to cast a shadow
Turn to them for blissful ignorance
Turn to them for stifling blindness
Two stay open to the world
Turn to them when you want to see
Turn to them to be blinded again

Really, we’re all blind in the end
Folds are corners, corners are folds
We’ve been blinded by folds
Or so I’ve been told

Can’t see for myself, can I?

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Old 06-23-2008, 10:28 AM   #12 (permalink)
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Old 06-23-2008, 12:14 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Hmmm....Yea. i posted a couple in...the Hobbie section I think. Guess I didn't search good enough for any threads on it.

here's a recent one- although I already posted it elsewhere...

Lost in a Heartbeat
By: me

Ba-bum.
Ba-bum.
That's what it sounds like.
like the pitter-patter or rain,
Your heartbeat never leaves my memory.
Your laugh
Your smile,
the stubs of your hair on my chin,
as they tickle mine-
Your arms wrapped around my body,
Your distinct smell,
as a sense of Security emcompasses me.
Your lips against My cheek,
My forehead,
My nose,
and then My lips.
Your fingers through My hair-
and mine through Yours.
the whispers of Your deep voice,
in My ear.
My head against Your chest.
and yet again I was gone,
Lost in Your heartbeat.
Ba-bum.
Ba-bum.
Ba-bum.

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Old 07-02-2008, 04:32 AM   #14 (permalink)
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so i found this on an old blog along with a bunch of others writen in like 04 or something random... hope ya'll like but keep in mind i was 16

sitting on a plane
beads of sweat slowly decend
the necklace from you chokes me
clinging to my pillow i gasp
no air just a nervious passenger
my veins about to burst
ears popping baby crying
lightning calmly yelling far away
im safe here to see the art
its a masterpeice
rhythmic blinking of incecent red light
no nausia til landing
yet steaper we climb
above the heavens
where my dreams of you take me
blink blink blink
no smoke clean air
my sanctuary above you, high
above armagedon, chaos cause i left
i cant breath
my ring from you chokes
everyones sleeping while i die
orion will save me.

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Old 07-03-2008, 10:43 PM   #15 (permalink)
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oh what great post of poems . can i copy all of these for my collections?
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