This is where I shall be posting some of my myspace blogs that I feel have certain characteristics pertaining to literature. Mostly me going of on rants, or laying down a rap...
CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM PEOPLE
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Titled: Weirded <---the feeling at the time of said rap
I'm full of...stuff. To put it into a word, one that more often then not describes much less than hand signals might.
I take flight. Running at high speeds that most cheetah's dare not.
Forget-me-not-blue. The color of the eyes I wish to once meet, once to greet, buy a coffee or two.
We sit and chat, I just wear a hat, daring not to give away a look of personality, that might say, perhaps....originality. Beginning to see, that if not for me, them and you...I would not be, then who?
True...those words are never spoken, forever broken. Lost in thoughts of lies and slander, take a look and gander at what mine eyes see. Describe to thee the description of who deals in untruthfulness...utterly preposterous. It would take me a century see, because this describes me...
Not you...
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Personally, I wrote it fast. So when I read it, I read it fast so that in the blur of words...it sounds plausible.