Poem Contest/help me with my HW... prize reward

Tan · 09-12-2007, 11:44 PM

I need to write a poem about peace for my english project, thing is i suck at poems... If anyone would like to write me a poem, feel free to. Post or PM me the poem about peace. Best poem I choose gets points reward.

1st: 1,000,000 points reward
2nd: 500,000 points reward
rest: undecided amount of points.

DEADLINE TOMMOROW NIGHT

plus Rep too :)

Himeko · 09-13-2007, 04:52 AM

Hell yeah.

I suck at writing poems.
But I'm sure I could come up with one.

Are diamond poems alright? (Might not do that one, but just wanna ask)

Also, I'm kind of self conscious about my work, so can I just PM it to you instead of showing everyone?

That's assuming I do come up with something.

Impaired · 09-13-2007, 01:24 PM

I don't believe in cheating.

I do love to write poetry though.

The bombs have stopped falling
No bullets yet fly
The siren's not calling
In peace, you can die

Alone for the present
As life bleeds away
Alive in a moment
Of war's disarray

Silence and blackness
Drift slowly down
Inside a cool slackness
That softens your frown

Alone your first breath
Your last gasp released
Freed now by your death
At last, gaining peace

[=]

Himeko · 09-13-2007, 02:27 PM

I'm not even going to try after that.

That's REALLY good, Impaired....

Impaired · 09-13-2007, 03:06 PM

Thanks. I love to write. Shame I don't do it for a living.

Tan · 09-13-2007, 05:39 PM

wow that was goood. just take the points, take it

SuiGeneris · 09-13-2007, 06:15 PM

I was going to attempt something, but that was absolutely awesome Impaired. Post more of your works please. It definatly had a great chill/chaos flow going to it the entire time. Many props.

Impaired · 09-14-2007, 10:28 AM

THanks. I'll post more when I get the chance.